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"ALAN &
ELLIE"
by Yvonne Bartha
Chapter 1: A Hero In The
Night
Ellie
Sattler was driving on a very dark and narrow road. It was about
She
had the driver's side window rolled down, so that she could take in some of the
fresh air. Her medium length blonde hair danced around as the night air entered
the car. Even at night, on this lonely two-lane highway, she felt as though she
belonged.
She
was about to slow down and pull over, to look at her map again, when one of her
tires on her car gave way, exploding with a loud "pop". Ellie's car
sharply veered off to right and headed for the small cliff on the side of the
road. She grabbed hold of the steering wheel and yanked it back the other way,
but the car continued to go toward the cliff. She never panicked. She just kept
pressure on the brakes and on the wheel, until the car slowed down enough for
her to regain some control. It skidded to a stop, along the shoulder of the
country road. Her body was jerked to the side, as the car stopped moving. She
sat in the driver's seat, slightly shaking, as she thought about how close she
came to driving off the cliff. It probably would have been considered suicide,
she thought to herself.
She
opened the car door and stepped outside, to survey the damage. The left rear
tire was blown out and pieces of it were scattered all over the road. She
walked to the edge of the cliff and reluctantly looked down, instantly
regretting it. The sheer drop almost made her dizzy, as it shook her up even
more. She walked shakily to the trunk and opened it, looking for the spare. She
swore to herself, when she remembered that it was taken out about 2 weeks
before. She had needed the extra space in the trunk to transport something for
her mother, and she had forgotten to put the tire back. She swore silently
again, and closed the trunk, hitting the top of it over and over in
frustration.
She
got back in the car, and reached over to the passenger seat, where her purse
was. She opened her purse, revealing a portable phone. Her uncle was in the
electronics business, and had insisted that she take one of his portable
phones, if she was set on going to the middle of nowhere. She turned it on and
called information. There was some static, but she was able to hear adequately.
Information connected her to a local tow truck service station. She requested a
tow truck, but couldn't figure out where the hell she was exactly, so the
dispatcher told her they would be there when they could. She left the phone on
and placed it back into her purse. She left the car accessories on, so that she
could leave the headlights of the car on. That way, people could see her on the
side of the road. She didn't like the idea of sitting out in the middle of
nowhere . . . alone . . . so she turned the radio on, to distract herself.
She
was about to give the tow truck place another call, when she saw headlights
appear a short distance ahead of her. She smiled and put the phone down. For a
precaution, she also casually grabbed the mace can from her purse. She was in
the middle of nowhere in the pitch blackness, after all. She got out of the car
and began to wave her arms in distress. The headlights become brighter and
brighter, as the vehicle got closer. After a few seconds, Ellie could see that
the headlights belonged to a truck. The truck slowed down as it approached, and
then came to a stop right next to her. Now that she could see the truck
clearly, she sighed as she saw that it wasn't the tow truck. She could see a
man inside, which caused her to become a little alarmed. The window rolled
down. The man had to roll it down by hand.
"What
seems to be the problem here?" The man asked.
He
had a hint of an Australian accent.
"Oh,
well, my car blew a tire."
The
man looked over at her car.
"Looks
like you nearly ran off the side of the mountain."
Ellie
slightly bent down to see the man's face more clearly. He had messy brown hair
and was in need of a shave, as he had the beginnings of a beard. Her first
impression of him was that he was nice looking, even with the messy appearance.
She found herself staring at his mouth as he spoke. She snapped out of it,
after realizing what she was doing.
"Yeah.
I was frightened for a few minutes there. But I managed to get the car
stopped."
"Do
you need some help?"
Ellie
wasn't sure why she felt so at ease with the stranger, but the plain fact was
that she did feel safe.
"Oh,
yes. Could you? I don't have a spare tire. I could really use a ride into the
next town, if that isn't too much trouble?"
The
man smiled.
"It's
no trouble at all. Just get your things and we'll head out," he said.
Ellie
turned and went to her car. She put the mace back in her purse and grabbed her
portable phone. Then she grabbed one of the bigger bags from the backseat. She
put the bag on the ground and closed all of the car doors, locking the car with
her car keypad. When she went to pick up the large and heavy bag, the man from
the truck appeared next to her, and grabbed the handle of the bag. His sudden
appearance startled her and she almost screamed, as she reached her hand into
her purse, securing the mace. The man could see that he frightened her, and so
he tried to make conversation.
"I'm
just trying to help here, so you can relax a little bit, okay? The name's
Alan."
Ellie
smiled at him. His face seemed vaguely familiar to her, but she couldn't place
where she might have seen him. She decided to stop thinking about it for right
now, as the man continued to look at her, waiting for her introduction.
"Well,
pleased to meet you Alan," she said. Then she let the mace can go and
pointed at herself, "Ellie."
"Well,
welcome to
She
nodded. He picked up her bag, over-exaggerating its heaviness, and then carried
it toward his truck. After putting the bag in the truck bed in the back, he
walked around to the passenger side of the truck and opened the door for her.
She smiled and got into the truck. As he was walking around to the other side,
he began to think about the perfume she was wearing. It was mesmerizing really,
and she was a very beautiful woman . . . he noticed that instantly. He opened
the driver's side door and got inside, glancing over at her and smiling again.
"So,
where are you heading?"
Ellie
had no idea. It was then that she remembered the map was sitting in the
passenger seat of her car.
"Well,
I was on my way to
Alan
smiled.
"Ah,
"Oh,
good. About how far, do you have an idea?"
"About
another hour, a little bit less. You don't have that much farther to go."
He
put the truck in gear and they began to drive away. Ellie didn't know what to
do with her car. It probably wouldn't be wise to leave it here, in the middle
of nowhere. As she was thinking about what to do, Alan spoke.
"When
we get to the next town, you can call for a tow truck. It's only a few miles
away."
"Oh,
I already did that," she said, holding up her portable phone. "But
because I have no idea where I am, I don't think they'll be coming anytime
soon."
Alan
glanced at the device in her hand. It was very big and clunky looking, making
him snicker.
"That
thing is a phone?"
Ellie
laughed, too.
"Yeah,
my uncle made me bring it. And I'm happy that I did now. I'll call the tow
truck guy again, if you could tell me where we are."
"Sure."
Ellie
dialed the operator again, and was connected to the tow truck dispatcher.
"Holanda
Tow Services. Jack speaking."
"Uh,
hello, Jack. My name is Ellie Sattler. I called a little earlier . . . about a
car with a blown tire?"
Alan
continued to drive, as he listened to the conversation. Now he knew her last
name.
"Sure,
ma'am. I remember you. Did you figure out where you were yet?"
"Very
funny. Yes I have the location now."
"Care
to share it with me, ma'am?"
Ellie
rolled her eyes, and then she looked at Alan.
"Where
is it again?"
"Off
Highway 59. About 60 miles south of
Ellie
nodded and repeated the location to the dispatcher.
"Okay,
ma'am. It looks as though I have a truck in the vicinity. He'll be there in
about an hour."
"An
hour?" Ellie yelled into the phone, "In the vicinity . . . means a
damn hour?"
Alan
glanced at her while she was screaming, and then brought his attention back to
the dark road ahead. He found her to be very outspoken, and he admired her for
that. She was not only beautiful, but she seemed to be able to take care of
herself.
"Whoa,
ma'am, look, don't start swearing at the messenger. An hour is the best that I
can do. Would you rather he didn't show up at all?"
"Of
course not," she said into the phone, somewhat calmer than the previous
outburst.
"Okay,
good. Then he'll be there in an hour, ma'am."
"Fine."
Ellie
turned the phone off and stewed in the truck for a few seconds, before blurting
out how she felt about the situation.
"If
that damn guy ma'am's me, one more time, I'll track him down and punch
him."
Alan
chuckled and Ellie looked at him.
"Oh,
don't worry. I'm not about to call you ma'am," he stated.
She
laughed.
"Well,
thanks for that."
"You're
welcome," he said, and then he changed the subject, "So, since the
tow truck will be here soon, why don't I just take you to the nearest town and
treat you to a late dinner?"
Ellie
wanted to accept the invitation immediately, but she let the question linger in
the air for a bit, before she responded.
"Sure.
Only it's not necessary to buy me dinner."
"I
insist."
Ellie
decided to let him have his way for the time being.
"Okay,
then."
"Good,
it's settled," he said, smiling.
He
glanced at her a few times, while talking with her, but now he paid attention
to the winding road outstretched in front of him. He couldn't seem to stop
thinking about how beautiful and vibrant she was. He hadn't really thought
about a woman, since his wife had passed away a few years ago. He found himself
wanting to know more about this particular woman, whom he found on the side of
the road.
He
drove the truck several miles down the road and pulled into a small roadside
diner. Ellie looked at the rickety old building.
"This
place is open?"
Alan
smiled.
"Yeah,
I think so. Everything around here kind of looks old and run down."
Ellie
looked at him and spoke before she even thought about what she was saying.
"Not
everything is old and run down."
Feeling
completely stupid, she turned away from him, opened the truck door and got out.
Alan sat there for a minute smiling, and then he opened the driver's door and
followed her toward the building. He jogged up past her and opened the aging
door. She nodded and smiled uneasily, and then went through the door.
As
she went inside, she took in the environment. It was very casual, with a few
people sitting in the small room. There were only about 7 booths and a bar
toward the back, complete with about 10 bar stools. It looked as though there
was just one waitress, which was adequate for a place of this size. It was
somewhat run down, but it had a very nice homey feeling to it. She felt
comfortable there, that was for sure. Alan walked toward one of the booths.
When he found the one he wanted, he gestured for her to sit down.
She
nodded again, as he played the gentleman part and waited for her to sit down
first. He really was a very nice man, she kept thinking to herself. Whenever he
would look away, she would stare at the features on his face, trying to decide
how old he might be. She thought about asking him directly, but then decided
she would just wait until another time.
"So,
what kind of food do you like?"
"Oh,
a lot of different things really. I'm not all that fussy."
Alan
nodded and a few seconds later the waitress was at their table.
"What
can I get for you two?"
Alan
looked at Ellie, so she ordered first.
"I'll
have a cheeseburger and fries, please."
The
waitress nodded, but didn't write it down. She was one of those people who
didn't have to write things down.
"And
what to drink?"
"Some
iced tea, please."
The
waitress nodded, indicating she got the order, then she looked at Alan.
"And
for you, sir?"
"Same,"
he said.
The
waitress walked away and began to yell the order to the kitchen.
"Nice
place here," Ellie said, looking around.
Alan
looked around, too.
"Yeah,
pretty nice. I've never been here before. I hope the food is good . . . so you
don't hold it against me."
"Don't
worry, I won't," Ellie said smiling at him.
She
found herself smiling at him quite often and she told herself she needed to
stop that, before he thought she was some crazy person.
Alan
had been thinking about how much she smiled at him, too. He didn't find it
crazy, though. He rather enjoyed it. There was something about Ellie that made
him very comfortable, as well. He was beginning to feel like he might be able
to talk to her for hours in this little dump.
They
continued to talk about mostly nothing, and then the food came. They quickly
ate, and then Alan went to the payphone to check on the progress of the tow
truck. When he came back to the table, Ellie was getting money out.
"There's
no need for that. Really. I told you I wanted to treat you to dinner."
"Oh,
well, it's okay. I wouldn't feel right having you pay."
"It
would be my pleasure," he said, staring into her eyes.
Ellie
didn't say anything for a second, as she just stared back. Alan broke the
silence.
"Besides,
it would allow me to properly greet you into town. How's that?"
"Okay,
then," she said, putting her money away, "Thank you."
"You're
welcome."
Ellie
changed the subject.
"So,
did they get to my car yet?"
He
was still staring into her eyes. When he heard the question, it took him a
minute for it to register.
"Oh
. . . uh, yeah. They found the car. He said they were fixing it right
now."
"We
should be heading back then," Ellie said.
Alan
nodded in agreement. He went to the register and paid for the meal, and then he
walked her outside. She quickly got in the truck and he did the same. They
began to drive back the way they came.
"Can
I at least give you some money for gas?"
"Nope."
"You're
a very difficult man," she joked.
"I've
been told that before."
"I
bet you have," she countered.
Alan
playfully slapped the dashboard.
"And
I thought my people skills were improving," he said. Then looking at her,
"Guess I was wrong."
She
laughed at him. She enjoyed his company and she was getting disappointed, now
that they were getting close to where her car was. Soon, they would depart and
go their separate ways.
"Well,
maybe someone just needs to work closer with you, in regards to those people
skills of yours."
"Yeah,
possibly," he said, watching the road and Ellie at the same time.
Ellie
noticed that he was looking at something ahead of them. She looked that way,
too, and saw the tow truck lights flashing. Alan drove about another mile and
then slowed the truck down, as they grew closer. A few seconds later he stopped
the truck, put it into park, and looked at Ellie.
"Well,
it looks as though they fixed it already."
"Yeah,"
Ellie said, disappointed.
"What's
wrong?"
"Oh,
nothing."
Ellie
opened the passenger's side door and got out of the truck, putting a cease to
Alan's questions. She walked up to her car. The tow truck driver was still
messing with something near the rear of the car.
"How's
it coming along?" She asked, as she approached him.
The
tow truck driver was hunched over, looking at something on the back of the car.
Ellie startled him, causing him to jump to his feet quickly. His sudden
movements startled Ellie in return, causing her to take several steps backward.
Alan
was still in his truck, just waiting for her to get back into her car and drive
away safely. When he saw her defensive movements, he quickly got out and headed
toward her. He could hear her verbally disagreeing with the man, as she continued
to shake her head in defiance. He reached Ellie and then walked past her.
"Everything
all right?" He asked.
The
tow truck driver looked up in a rush, as if the sudden presence of someone else
was in no way possible.
"No,
everything is NOT all right. The lady owes me money and she won't pay."
Just
from uttering the first few syllables, Alan could tell the man was drunk. Very
drunk. In fact, it surprised him that the man could even drive.
"I'm
sure she's going to pay you . . . ," Alan looked at the name tag sewn into
the man's shirt, "Raymond."
Ellie
was happy to see that Alan hadn't driven off yet. It was well past
"He
wants five hundred bucks. Or he says he'll flatten the new tire."
"Five
hundred dollars?" Alan said, sort of laughing. He looked at Raymond,
pulling some money out of his own pocket, "How about 30 dollars, Raymond?
That's fair."
Raymond
shook his head.
"I
don't think so, mister."
Alan
noticed the man had a crowbar in his hand and it made him a little uneasy. He
backed off and joined Ellie, who was still keeping her distance. Raymond moved
closer to them.
"If
the lady doesn't have the money, she could pay it off in another way,"
Raymond slurred.
Ellie
couldn't believe what the man just said. Alan became understandably angry.
"Raymond,
I think you should quit while you're ahead."
"How
am I ahead, mister? I haven't been paid. Now if she comes home with me, then .
. . then I'll be ahead," Raymond said, snickering and still holding the
crowbar.
"Well,
I can tell you this much. She's not going anywhere with you."
"Mister,
you want me to beat you to death with this thing?" Raymond stated
gesturing to his crowbar.
Ellie
already had a bad feeling about the situation, even before Raymond started to
threaten people. She grabbed Alan's hand and pulled him away from Raymond.
"Let's
just get back in your truck, okay?"
As
Alan looked toward her, just for that second, Raymond made his move. He stepped
forward, swinging the crowbar toward Alan. Ellie could see the whole thing. She
screamed and pulled Alan toward her. The crowbar missed him and smashed into
the backseat side window, causing glass to fly everywhere.
Alan
rushed toward the drunk man, but wasn't able to do anything to him. Ellie was
already doing something. She sprayed Raymond with her mace. They watched him
grab for his eyes, lose his footing, trip over his own feet, knock himself out
on Ellie's car door, and then fall to the pavement hard. Ellie was beside
herself, as she tried to take everything in that had just happened.
"Holy
shit! Are you okay!?" Ellie yelled from behind Alan.
"I'm
fine," Alan said, looking at Raymond's unconscious body, and then glancing
over at Ellie and her mace can.
"That
damn guy tried to kill you!" She yelled.
"He's
just drunk," Alan said, still trying to comprehend what had happened.
"Yeah,
but he was a drunk with a damn crowbar."
"Where
did you get that?" He asked, gesturing toward Ellie's mace can.
"I
carry it with me for protection."
"Well,
it certainly came in handy."
"Yeah,"
Ellie said, and then she snickered, "And to think, I was toying with the
idea of using it on you when you first pulled up."
"Remind
me to never upset you," he stated.
Ellie
laughed. Alan smiled and then surveyed the damage to her car.
"The
bastard broke your window."
"Better
than your head," Ellie offered.
Alan
looked at her. She still couldn't believe what had just transpired. She was
full of energy and quite alert.
"Holy
shit," she repeated, much softer than before.
They
stood in the road, uncertain of what to do next. Ellie finally made the first
move.
"Well,
let's get him back in his tow truck at least. I'll call them and let them know
where he is."
Alan
nodded. Together, they were able to get Raymond back into his truck. Alan
slammed the door of the tow truck and Ellie could hear the door hit Raymond in
the head. She figured he did it on purpose, but didn't question him. She only
snickered. Alan looked at her, laughing a little bit himself.
"You
going to be okay driving that car?"
"Oh,
yeah. No worries," she said in her best fake Australian accent.
"Was
that some sort of Australian joke?"
"Uh,
no."
"Good,
because it was awful."
She
laughed.
"Note
to self. No more Australian humor."
After
she achieved the desired response from him, she opened her car door and got
inside, careful to check for glass that might have flown into the front seat.
He closed the door for her and then leaned down to talk to her.
"I
guess that's it then," he stated.
"Thank
you very much for all your help . . . and dinner."
"You're
welcome, Ellie."
She
really liked how he said her name. She didn't want to just let him drive away,
possibly never seeing him again.
"Perhaps
we'll meet again," she said.
"Yes.
I would like that."
Ellie
went for it.
"Could
I call you sometime, maybe?"
Alan
took the bait and happily went along.
"Sure.
Hold on, I'll write my number down for you."
Ellie
opened her glove compartment.
"Here.
Here's some paper and a pen."
He
smiled and took the paper and pen from her, quickly scribbled a number on the
paper, and handed it back to her. She didn't read it. She just put it in her
pocket and thanked him. He nodded and walked toward his truck. Ellie started
her car and put it into gear. She slowly drove toward his truck, where he was
just getting in. He looked at her.
"If
I'm ever attacked by an over-priced, drunk, crowbar-wielding madman again . . .
I'll give you a call, okay?"
He
laughed. She really liked his laugh and she found herself staring at his lips
again, as he spoke. Now she wished she had figured out how to get a good-bye
kiss from the endearing stranger.
"Okay,
that's a deal. Hope to hear from you soon," he answered.
"Sooner
than you might think actually. Which way to Jordan again?"
He
pointed to the north.
"Okay,
got it. Thanks again, Alan."
"It
was no trouble. Well, not much trouble anyway."
He
started his truck and began to drive away. He held his arm out of the rolled
down window and waved at her. She waved back and began to drive her car down
the two-lane highway, in the opposite direction.